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- opening sequence: what is the script we see projected?
- Rolands in opening sequence find stillness and your jamie faster; it looks messy
- all have to say i'm jamie, i'm roland
- you all need to be confident with the order too long pauses before each scene
- lovely puppet first scene paige and chris. maybe we need to establish characters a bit more first before they appear?
- Harry and Zoe first scene. let's try an overlap. Harry go from James' universe and go close to Zoe when you kneel down beside her
- Can we all try that you take exact pose of previous Jamie or Roland to start your scene with…
- lovely idea to mould G & Sam. can you think further when in the lines the action comes and what it signifies? How does it help you illustrate your desire or objective.
- Have we lost some of those very engaging duration, repetition tempo moments?
- Jamie's motif could work well over zoe's speech but needs adjusting. More 'cosmological'??
- Zoe's line ' in a multiverse, every choice….' needs something impressive to help with meaning.
- G & Sam, can you try next time you do playing tennis scene from across the stage? But great movement sequence.
- Great overlap with affair reveal with paige & chris and harry and zoe. can you 4 work together on choreographing that sonically?
- but then, finish paige and chris scene but james' one line can come a bit earlier.
- Some Rolands need to be much more surprised by reveal so that when Dan says ' i know' it's genuine. otherwise it feels like all Rolands already knew.
- Paige and Chris. Maybe your couple resorts to puppets when things are hard to say or words difficult to find.
- Harry appear from somewhere different in the ballroom scene? maybe from a new universe?
- At ballroom dance scene. Something in the universes has changed. You can't do scenes from your old two people universe. Maybe the dance sequence needs to come before then to break the universes? Maybe whole dynamic and setting needs to change for this. Whole ballroom dance sequence where jamie's talk across to Rolands? Maybe it's during the lesson rather than just before with all of you just stretching.
- Let's go for a drink scenes. You have to show different choices.
- Yes let's overlap agreeing to proposal Jonathan and Greg with Yvette and Dan scene.
- great keyboard tapping /drumming Greg, lt's revisit.
- Harry and Zoe, i got by biopsy results. Can we try that overlap over chris and paige proposal? just the beginning of it? then it can be repeated. Ideally with the 'i love you' repeated again just after paige says no.
- Jamie and Laura work with Jonathan and Greg to overlap your scenes. It could be really powerful.
- Yvette and Dan can you work with Sam and G to intermingle your scenes? the going abroad with the cancer reveal scene.
- chris and james, please work towards performing without scripts as soon as possible
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