- let's add to jamie motif
- laura, be careful of not getting stuck with patterns in first speech. first lines we hear need to be very clear
- let's overal yvette's elbow speech with jonathan and greg signing
- be careful of referencing football playing tom with another actor. might confuse audience.
- G & Sam; when you go into another universe, maybe the others can roll out and give up their spaces
- At any given moment several different outcomes can exist simultaneously
- Drinks with light in!
- Harry 'preferably'
- Laura 'you'll be fine' after affair revelation; don't dismiss him so easily
- Lunatic laughter. is the inferno line that funny?
- Jonathan and Greg can your whole marriage proposal be in silence. visually clear that he says yes
- great bee speech chris
- change harry and zoe it;s all ok scene. You've learnt to ballroom, let's have that happy dancing in?
- make a decision where is each taxi going?
- gives us extra half an hour - chris and paige? is this a suggestive joke? makes sense of the go to sleep bit after?
Scenes to choreograph
1. opening
2. ballroom
3. multiuniverse (zoe speech)
4. packing
5. ending
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